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June Entry: Hide and Seek
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:12 pm
Straight from the time warp (it's still June 30th there), I present my entry for the month, "Hide and Seek"! Bask in the original-ness of my title!
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:13 pm
And here is the magnificent page 2! Note to self: I hate speedlines.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:15 pm
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:17 pm
Page 4. I'm sorry the story's choppy. I drew out so many rough drafts that didn't work, I eventually just said, "screw this," and shoved everything together. Which resulted in this.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:19 pm
Last and least, page 5!
My idea for July is "windows."
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:44 pm
I know you may not want to hear this, but.. that was really cute <333
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:42 pm
Thank you! Cute is good.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:23 pm
Were the two girls the nightmare?
Don't ask xDD;
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:34 pm
Aww, that was cute! The twins are adorable!
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:48 pm
minakichan (post: 1242240) wrote:Aww, that was cute! The twins are adorable!
I know right <333
You should make more Aileen ^ ^
PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 10:06 pm
Haha, thanks guys.
No, Lucky, the twins weren't the nightmare. I think the original idea was that they ran the nightmares off, but I can't say for sure. After awhile I stopped trying to think about the whole thing. XD.
And just to clear things up: the one with pigtails is a girl, and the one without is a boy. Yay for androgyny!
PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 6:10 pm
I really liked this, you know. It was simple, but the simple way the main character talks makes it very poignant, I think. The nightmares kind of reminded me of Hiromu Arakawa's grinning shadows in Full Metal Alchemist XD
But I especially like the message of this manga. The message that you need to turn to other people for help sometimes. It was beautifully put.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:50 pm
How did I miss this for five days? It must that time-warp of yours...
Very cool entry, Aileen! I'm impressed at how quickly you did it.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 3:34 pm
Thanks, you guys. I'm glad people like it.
I'm not sure quickly would be an entirely accurate description, though. In fact, I seem to remember it taking a long time. A looonnng, frustrating amount of time...
Must've been that darn time-warp. That'll teach me to play mess with the space-time continuum.