Allow me, some comments:
2) There are some panels that utilize the same screentones consecutively after one another. While it works for certain manga scenes, I suggest using different screentones or background in between panels (you know, alternate them). I was mostly referring to Page 3, middle panels.
Eheh, forgive the lack of green text. That's just too much typing for me right now...XD
Hmm...I'm willing to bet that I remember which panels you're talking about, and if that's the case, you're certainly right. I should probably go back and prepare it...
3) The reunion was sweet. @^_^@ Awwww....*looks for someone to glomp*
4) The Jesus cloak was....shocking, to say the least. Sheesh, I can't believe how ppl would create such stories and become obsessed about the cloak...(and not the person who wore it instead siigghhh.) Don't take my comments negatively, I'll just like to see what happens next. ^^
Nah, I didn't think you were being critical.
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5) wow, Rivalen and Iriel's mum was very pretty.
6) Nice climatic end of the chapter. XD
Thank you...^^ I'm glad you liked it. I think I might be getting better at this stuff...O.o
Melmak, BTW, thanks for reminding me to go back over to Topica and try to resend my newsletter...
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