uc pseudonym wrote:This forum isn't frequented, but I at the very least would be glad to talk with you about it and perhaps provide direction. What do you have so far?
On other terms, welcome to our forums and glad to have you with us.
Thank you. I'm glad to be here.
So far what I have characterwise is Jynx, Bob, Lucy, Perry, Zita Moranova, and Dorathy. (there are a few more but I'll start with these first.
The Story is suppose to start out with Dorathy. In short she meets the stereotypical goth girl standard, however she has a deeper character than that, she just doesn't like to show it to most people. She encounters a autistic kid which she dubbs Jynx in either a junkyard, street, or warehouse (I'm still trying to decide) and it so happens that Jynx has a metal helmet (a chrome dome) fastened and fused to his skull. The helmet covers his eyes so one would assume that he is blind, but he somehow see's through the helm. Jynx lives up to his names sake, irritating Dorathy and ultimately following her home like a lost puppy. His abilities range from super agility, hardheadedness, picking up radio broadcasts through his helmet and everyonce and a while being struck by lightning yet being unphazed by the truama. His greatest asset however is his child like faith in God.
Bob happens to be an average sorta guy that happens to be homeless and happens to wear a straw hat all the time. Only thing different about him is he happens to be 130-230 (still haven't decided on age yet) years old. He benefits from years of combat experiance and the wisdom that comes along with his age. He is a faithful christian that usually goes on unnoticed as he plays the part of a street preacher. Although he is kinda filthy and unpopular among many people that he meets he has a few friends, but unfortunately many enemies such as his ex girlfriend Zita Moranova, who is as old as he is and was a Russian Czar. She now runs a large mafia and tries to kill Bob from time to time, yet at the same time she still is carrying a torch for him.
Perry was once an artist that under went a tragic accident that turned him into a savant. He is introverted and anti social and hates his new mental prowess, but after meeting Lucy, an armless 7 foot ex naby seal happy go lucky red head, he was motivated in his heart to create for her prosthetic (kick butt cybernetic actually) limbs and afterwards they have been good friends since even though that fight like cats and dogs.
I've been debating with myself wether I should make all this one comic or three seperate comics. I put these characters in several scenarios and such but as for coming up with a solid plot its still blurry. I think I'm missing a key element to glue everything together I think. Whats your take on it?